a million kind eyes.
All the stars watching over me,
keep me safe while i ponder about my dreams
The luminous ivory lights shine brightly against the night sky,
contrasting like black and white.
I watch and i wait for my eyes to find another pattern
there is nothing to fear.
The cool wind can only touch my chilly pink face and
My eyes get droopy as i burrow deeper into my covers
As if Gravity is pulling my lids down
I get one last glipmse at a million kind eyes,
before I wake up to a fiery sunrise.
Filed by two19 at September 30th, 2007 under Uncategorized
Wow! I love the idea of eyes…and your use of descriptive words. One of my favorite lines here…”As if Gravity is pulling my lids down.” Boy…I can really “feel” that line! Great job! Can’t wait to read more!
tcoffey — November 10, 2007 @ 11:53 am