unicorns rule the world[:
The Magical Adventure of Flo and Lottie
1. Our book turned out better than i expected, but there are a few improvments that could be made. The music wasnt entirely on time, and sometimes the music overpowered the voice. The theme was Friendship.
2. We made their friendship in jeporady for the suspense. Our mood was happy most of the time, but sad at some parts. Unicorns and stars cant talk so that is personification.
3. I would make the timing of the music just right, and make sure the voices arent drowned out. Additionaly I would add some slides making sure that the story makes complete sense.
Filed by two19 at November 2nd, 2007 under Uncategorized
