Becoming Free
I really liked this poem Becoming Free by Suzannah from Atlanta,GA. I interpreted the poem as one about making changes.
One line that really stood out to me was “Sometimes I want to soar like a silver tipped bird into a silky blue sky, singing with the soft sounds of the wind.” I can really visualize whats happening in that phrase. Another line that i liked was “I’d like to spread my wings to the farthest gates of the earth, pushing off this dry land in escape from this path I have taken too long.” This verse shows that she wants to make changes in her life, and “spread her wings”.
Thank you Suzannah, i can’t wait to hear more from you because this poem was really great!
Filed by two19 at April 25th, 2008 under Uncategorized